Отправлено: 21.10.09 19:59. Заголовок: POETICAL TOURNAMENT

POETICAL TOURNAMENT.

You like poetry and you have what to say to others, don’t you? You are ardent and like the spirit of competition, isn’t it so? Congratulations! You are the very person who should participate in a poetical tournament on the forum of Distant Center of Education “Eidos”. So today we invite you to be one of the participants of a poetical tournament which will be held in the form of discussion.

The theme of the discussion: “You can't write poetry on the computer”. Quentin Tarantino

The terms of the discussion: Post your poem on the theme of discussion on the forum. Besides you should read the poems of other at least 2 participants and express your own opinion, agreement or disagreement with their authors.

Attention! All discussion is only in verses!

 Отправлено: 22.10.09 20:31. Заголовок: Computers mustn't come to mind...

Regardless where to create
And what to use for it
You certainly must not forget
That word is as a bit
Of refined arrow... Isn't it?
It may effect on all your being
It's built by it as well
It makes you smile,
It makes you sing,
It makes you cry,
And also think
About varios mistakes
And happy moments. In that case
I'd like to say and underline
Whether the keyboard or the ink,
Try to invent a gorgeous think,
(It's unimportant where) Save it,
Don't let the time to make it burried.
Computers mustn't come to mind.

 Отправлено: 22.10.09 20:31. Заголовок: Computers mustn't come to mind.

Regardless where to create
And what to use for it
You certainly must not forget
That word is as a bit
Of refined arrow... Isn't it?
It may effect on all your being
It's built by it as well
It makes you smile,
It makes you sing,
It makes you cry,
And also think
About varios mistakes
And happy moments. In that case
I'd like to say and underline -
Computers mustn't come to mind.
Whether the keyboard or the ink,
Try to invent a gorgeous think,
(It's unimportant where) Save it,
Don't let the time to make it burried.

 Отправлено: 22.10.09 20:31. Заголовок: Computers mustn't come to mind.

Regardless where to create
And what to use for it
You certainly must not forget
That word is as a bit
Of refined arrow... Isn't it?
It may effect on all your being
It's built by it as well
It makes you smile,
It makes you sing,
It makes you cry,
And also think
About varios mistakes
And happy moments. In that case
I'd like to say and underline -
Computers mustn't come to mind.
Whether the keyboard or the ink,
Try to invent a gorgeous think,
(It's unimportant where) Save it,
Don't let the time to make it burried.

 Отправлено: 22.10.09 20:41. Заголовок: I disagree with Quen..

I disagree with Quentin Tarantino
I think it is an incorrectly idea,
Cause if you write the poems well,
If you have a good imagination as well,
To write a poem on the computer or peace of paper
I think it doesn't really matter.

 Отправлено: 22.10.09 20:43. Заголовок: OMG What is it? What..

OMG What is it? What's happened with my posts? I'm really sorry for this.)) O_o

 Отправлено: 22.10.09 20:50. Заголовок: We may write poems o..

We may write poems on computer
All we need is practice
We may show
Our own emotions, thoughts, ideas
It's doesn't matter Where? and How?
On sheet of paper or on computer
It doesn't matter
To my mind,
it's doesn't matter....

 Отправлено: 22.10.09 20:52. Заголовок: I disagree with Quen..

I disagree with Quentin Tarantino
I think it is an incorrectly idea,
Cause if you write the poems well,
If you have a good imagination as well,
To write a poem on the computer or peace of paper
I think doesn't really matter.

 Отправлено: 22.10.09 21:06. Заголовок: Укроп пишет: I disa..

Укроп пишет:

цитата:

I disagree with Quentin Tarantino I think it is an incorrectly idea, Cause if you write the poems well, If you have a good imagination as well, To write a poem on the computer or peace of paper I think doesn't really matter.

That's it
You really right
Everything is going all right
If you had a good imagination
You can write on any subject
and its really so

 Отправлено: 22.10.09 22:03. Заголовок: If I'm full of t..

If I'm full of transcendental hot ideas,
My eyes will be in happy tears.
No matter what I choose to use, a paper or computer.
My rhymes will find a suitor.

Pay attention to the flight of thought
Rather than to paper or a keyboard!

 Отправлено: 22.10.09 21:05. Заголовок: ..

You can't write poetry on the computer
You really tired
Your eyes are closed
You are sitting one hour, two...
You can't do anything
Don't upset.
Switch off your computer
And go to bed.

 Отправлено: 22.10.09 21:16. Заголовок: Yo maybe right You m..

Yo maybe right
You maybe wrong
Computer likes a paper white
which does harm very very strong

 Отправлено: 22.10.09 21:09. Заголовок: You can't write ..

You can't write poetry on the computer
You really tired
Your eyes are closed
You are sitting one hour, two...
You can't do anything
Don't upset.
Switch off your computer
And go to bed.

 Отправлено: 22.10.09 21:09. Заголовок: You can't write ..

You can't write poetry on the computer
You really tired
Your eyes are closed
You are sitting one hour, two...
You can't do anything
Don't upset.
Switch off your computer
And go to bed.

 Отправлено: 22.10.09 21:49. Заголовок: The better way in an..

The better way in any situation
Is holding it for all the time switched off
It always brings some ruthful aftermaths
And illnesses instead of gifts.

 Отправлено: 23.10.09 11:21. Заголовок: You are righ! I did ..

You are righ! I did that yerstaday!

 Отправлено: 22.10.09 21:12. Заголовок: I think that poem mu..

I think that poem must be written on a feather
I think that poem must be written on a paper
I think that poem write with a hand
I think that poem it is the soul
I think that in the computer it can’t be thin in the hull
I think it’s not comfortable to write
On the computer I can write only poem are white

 Отправлено: 22.10.09 23:21. Заголовок: Where should you wri..

Where should you write a poem
On the computer or the sheet of paper
I think everybody knows
It doesn't matter.
It must be accessible and clean.
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made by Алексей Сергеев

 Отправлено: 22.10.09 23:48. Заголовок: I like you idea You ..

I like you idea
You are right
it doesn`t matter
where we can write!!!

 Отправлено: 22.10.09 23:35. Заголовок: Sheets of paper, pen..

Sheets of paper, pens or keyboards...
What's the odds?
We forget about our thoughts.
They inspire us to write the rhymes
Flying over clouds in the skies.
When we yield to feelings in the hearts,
Words in versus spring to our minds!
Then a poem goes its own way
So as to take the readers' breath away!

Anyway, my poems with my rhymes
Can dawn on me at different times...
Handwriting letter or e-letter
For me it doesn't matter!
When inspiration comes, we'll see
What we need, paper or pc.

I wouldn't go along with Tarantino,
I dissaprove of his idea!

 Отправлено: 23.10.09 00:15. Заголовок: Where should you wri..

Where should you write a poem
On the computer or the sheet of paper?
I think everybody knows
It doesn't matter.
It must be accessible and clear.

 Отправлено: 23.10.09 05:27. Заголовок: Where should you wri..

Where should you write a poem
On the computer or the sheet of paper?
I think everybody knows
It doesn't matter.
It must be accessible and clean.
Everybody can understand it even a deer.

 Отправлено: 23.10.09 00:15. Заголовок: 123..

123

 Отправлено: 23.10.09 00:15. Заголовок: Where should you wri..

Where should you write a poem
On the computer or the sheet of paper
I think everybody knows
It doesn't matter.
It must be accessible and clean.

 Отправлено: 23.10.09 06:27. Заголовок: you have an excellet..

you have an excellet idea
i like it so much
we shoud created poem
every where we want!!!!

 Отправлено: 23.10.09 08:26. Заголовок: If you have ideas If..

If you have ideas
If you sit in quit
Take the sheet of paper
And begin to write.

If your inspiration
Comes in one of days
Quickly show perceptions
In the different ways.

And it isn't matter
Where to write the verse
It is really better
When you have own voice.

Choose the style of spelling
And begin to press
Or begin the writing
In your documents.

 Отправлено: 23.10.09 08:38. Заголовок: Какен А.А. пишет: ..

Какен А.А. пишет:

цитата:

If you have ideas If you sit in quit Take the sheet of paper And begin to write. If your inspiration Comes in one of days Quickly show perceptions In the different ways. And it isn't matter Where to write the verse It is really better When you have own voice. Choose the style of spelling And begin to press Or begin the writing In your documents.

Your poem is very good

 Отправлено: 23.10.09 11:14. Заголовок: Какен А.А. пишет: I..

Какен А.А. пишет:

цитата:

If you have ideas If you sit in quit Take the sheet of paper And begin to write.

I agree with your poem.
The same with me.

 Отправлено: 23.10.09 13:17. Заголовок: Какен А.А. пишет: ..

Какен А.А. пишет:

цитата:

If you have ideas If you sit in quit Take the sheet of paper And begin to write. If your inspiration Comes in one of days Quickly show perceptions In the different ways. And it isn't matter Where to write the verse It is really better When you have own voice. Choose the style of spelling And begin to press Or begin the writing In your documents.

your poem just fine)) I think so тоо))

 Отправлено: 23.10.09 08:34. Заголовок: Gentle words, the..

Gentle words, there is an aim
It seems we are playing a game
Easy smile, but not fun
Sweet music for no one
I want to win and not to lose
I want to think and not to rest
I want to laugh and not to sight
When I had done all tasks right

 Отправлено: 23.10.09 09:59. Заголовок: I hope you carried o..

I hope you carried out tasks right
Because you very very kind!!!

 Отправлено: 24.10.09 14:45. Заголовок: oh my gareable, it s..

oh my gareable,
it so terrible

 Отправлено: 23.10.09 09:35. Заголовок: My idea is so clear ..

My idea is so clear
That you can dig it all.
Don’t be afraid and fear,
Comment me, hey! Come on!
I want to say you briefly
The poems are my life,
I try to get on deeply
Like steel and bitter knife.
My life is full of poets
And merriness, and fun,
Ideas sound like coins
And shine like summer sun.
You can write poems where
There are a lot of roads,
Or nobody’s disturbing,
And waves are caring boats
Of you imagination,
And soul comes away.
Give it emancipation
And it will really say
That wanted for the years,
And you will win it all!
Don’t worry, don’t have tears!
Let’s start it. So, let’s go!

 Отправлено: 23.10.09 10:00. Заголовок: ND пишет: Don’t be ..

ND пишет:

цитата:

Don’t be afraid and fear,

Excuse me? (Не будь страхом? хд)

People, don't you think it's boring
To use in every second post
The word, that's simply as a ghost...
Without synonyms... It's coming
To every second clever mind
And kicks out all of other kind...
Don't use this pair clear - idea,
Try to think of another rhyme
That would fit brilliantly here
And show the wealth of words in mind.

 Отправлено: 23.10.09 11:04. Заголовок: Oh! It is real fanta..

Oh! It is real fantastic!
I agree with you
Oh! Your poem is realistic
And this express what you do!

 Отправлено: 23.10.09 10:00. Заголовок: To write or not to w..

To write or not to write
It’s not the question.
If you can write,
You should write.
If you have ideas,
Emotions you want to share,
You should write poems.
I tried to write.
It was not easy, but exciting.
I wrote on paper
Because I’m sure
It’s better than computer.
You know
All famous poets wrote on paper.
You know
All famous stories were written by hand on paper.
I trust it more…

 Отправлено: 23.10.09 18:51. Заголовок: It’s pleasant to hea..

It’s pleasant to hear
Your beautiful words.
I think you’ll receive
All poetical awards.

 Отправлено: 23.10.09 10:59. Заголовок: Do you remember ,dea..

Do you remember ,dear,
Those beautiful days ,
When we writing here
Old poems in our ways.

I'll tell you why I'm tardy and I hope my excuse will do.
I stopped to view upon a leaf a spider and some dew.
She spun a web before my eyes with a soft and silver hue,
And when she looked, I looked at her and whispered, "Peekaboo!"

I think I may have startled her and so I waved good-bye,
But when I turned around to go, I met a butterfly!
I almost caught him in my hand to bring to class for you,
But when I tried to peek inside, away my treasure flew.

And that is how I'm tardy, but I had to tell you why.
It's all the fault of a spider's web and a sneaky butterfly!
Looking at all this beauty I become inspired
And I want to make up something light.

I create a lot of poems which express my thoughts
I plunge into the wonderful world where only I know roads
Nobody can disturb to flight of my ideas
And I leave this world without any fears.

 Отправлено: 23.10.09 18:50. Заголовок: Your poem is wonderf..

Your poem is wonderful!
I glad to hear it
Words are bright and colorful
You’ll win I predict.

 Отправлено: 23.10.09 12:29. Заголовок: Where we write poems..

Where we write poems.

When the trouble come in your home…
When love was born in your heart
When you feel that you are alone
Take paper and begin to write and write…

Write about your senses,
Write about your life,
Write that you want to say,
About that you keep at night

 Отправлено: 23.10.09 19:48. Заголовок: Your opinion is maje..

Your opinion is majestic;
You are great in all.
I agree with your poems which is realistic
And you never fall