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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 21.10.09 19:59. Заголовок: POETICAL TOURNAMENT


POETICAL TOURNAMENT.

You like poetry and you have what to say to others, don’t you? You are ardent and like the spirit of competition, isn’t it so? Congratulations! You are the very person who should participate in a poetical tournament on the forum of Distant Center of Education “Eidos”. So today we invite you to be one of the participants of a poetical tournament which will be held in the form of discussion.

The theme of the discussion: “You can't write poetry on the computer”. Quentin Tarantino

The terms of the discussion: Post your poem on the theme of discussion on the forum. Besides you should read the poems of other at least 2 participants and express your own opinion, agreement or disagreement with their authors.

Attention! All discussion is only in verses!


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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 22.10.09 08:28. Заголовок: Just do it!


You CAN write poetry on the computer!
You can write poetry everywhere!
You can write it even together!
Main thing it is desire!


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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 22.10.09 10:50. Заголовок: It might be you thought..


It might be you thought
Brevity is a sister of talant,
Next time think more
And make the words your servant.

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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 22.10.09 10:58. Заголовок: To write is not to L..


To write is not to Lie!
To write means to be happy!
Nobody in the world must cry,
When read the poems in Inete!

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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 22.10.09 14:14. Заголовок: I really agree, All..



I really agree,
All poems must make happiness!
And it is true, and it is better
To soft the internet,
But not for crying.
And only make you
Happy, clever, and more carefree.


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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 22.10.09 11:08. Заголовок: The last line keeps ..


The last line keeps a good idea
I think it's very pleased to hear
You're quite clever
But have you written poems ever?

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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 23.10.09 08:50. Заголовок: I always write in Ru..


I always write in Russian
And that's my first assay
I'm really like in ocean
Of minds and words to say.

And I have many problems
When I pick up the rhyme
It's very stressful process
So I sometimes want to cry.


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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 23.10.09 09:41. Заголовок: It's not an easy..


It's not an easy deal,
You need to practise more,
But I liked your idea
You'll open every door!
I write in Russian poems
And I agree with you
That it is important project
But we it have to do!)))

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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 25.10.09 10:12. Заголовок: Какен А.А. пишет: I..


Какен А.А. пишет:

 цитата:
I always write in Russian
And that's my first assay
I'm really like in ocean
Of minds and words to say.

And I have many problems
When I pick up the rhyme
It's very stressful process
So I sometimes want to cry.



My commentaries:

Thanks for your kindness
Thanks for your frankness
Try to develop imagination
Poetry – that’s our inspiration.


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Пост N: 1
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Откуда: Россия, Уфа
ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 25.10.09 19:03. Заголовок: Reply to Диана Трушникова



I can’t agree with you in this,
Because computers are such things,
Which help us print all kinds of texts
To understand the words in them.
I want to add to what I said:
Computers’ role in poetry is only in that.


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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 22.10.09 11:10. Заголовок: When you fly in the ..


When you fly in the heaven,
When you are only seven,
When you are black, when you are white
Take your pen and let's write!

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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 22.10.09 17:53. Заголовок: i agree with you ,my..


i agree with you ,my friend!
your discussion is right and correct!!!!! :

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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 22.10.09 21:41. Заголовок: I`m agree with y..


I`m agree with you,of course!
Your idea is the first!=)

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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 22.10.09 14:13. Заголовок: I really agree, All..



I really agree,
All poems must make happiness!
And it is true, and it is better
To soft the internet,
But not for crying.
And only make you
Happy, clever, and more carefree.


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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 22.10.09 14:43. Заголовок: You mus be joking!


Sorry baby but you are so wrong
You really think so? Come on!
You’re lyrics is a childish drive
It makes me fun! So fine!

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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 22.10.09 16:52. Заголовок: I agree with you You..


I agree with you
Your poem is good
And this is my opinion
It's not too long
And not toos short
Well written!

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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 24.10.09 14:45. Заголовок: А я ничо не понял по..


А я ничо не понял помагите мине плиз

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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 25.10.09 10:15. Заголовок: Mariko пишет: You C..


Mariko пишет:

 цитата:
You CAN write poetry on the computer!
You can write poetry everywhere!
You can write it even together!
Main thing it is desire!



My commentaries:

I like your ideas
They are so upbeat.
Desire’s - the main thing
It’s very helpful, indeed


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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 22.10.09 09:13. Заголовок: To write a poem It&..


To write a poem
It's a good idea.
By how will you do it?
Will you write it
on the computer or
will you write it
on a sheet of paper?
It doesn't matter
To my mind,
The main problem
is to find the readers
who will read your poetry
And who can understand
Your own emotions, thoughts, ideas!

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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 22.10.09 11:01. Заголовок: I think you really o..


I think you really opened us
The thought which always forces us
To write the poetry thus and thus.

It always makes us search the fame
And helps create the brilliant frame
And bring to our life a golden flame.

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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 22.10.09 11:11. Заголовок: I agree with you,my ..


I agree with you,my dear,
Your idea is quite clear,
I support you in the thought
Which you've caught.

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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 22.10.09 14:47. Заголовок: I suppose you’re rig..


I suppose you’re right,
Your piece is very good,
It clears our mind
And increases our mood


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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 22.10.09 19:52. Заголовок: Your emotions are ve..


Your emotions are very deep,
They are eager to compete.


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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 23.10.09 06:19. Заголовок: I fully agree with y..


I fully agree with you
You can write a poem everywhere
I know that your opinion is true
That your poem for a reader must be clear.

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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 23.10.09 09:42. Заголовок: I like your minds Th..


I like your minds
They really deep
We write the poems
To present our script.

The minds are better
Than the ways
Which we use to write
Poems in our days.





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Откуда: Россия, г. Белогорск
ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 25.10.09 04:07. Заголовок: Ягафарова Лилия пише..


Ягафарова Лилия пишет:

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To write a poem
It's a good idea.
By how will you do it?
Will you write it
on the computer or
will you write it
on a sheet of paper?
It doesn't matter
To my mind,
The main problem
is to find the readers
who will read your poetry
And who can understand
Your own emotions, thoughts, ideas!



My commentaries:

In this your poem I confess
All words that here you possess
Are real truth not more or less!
I’m in agreement with all of them
You should believe me
There’s no sham!

Alas, but poetry is such a thing
That needs those readers who can think.

It doesn’t touch upon the question
What to be written with and how.
Not problem was it in the past, to mention
Modern days, I vow (клянусь).

So, your point of view is right
Your thoughts are also quite bright
All in all they all are tight!


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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 22.10.09 09:21. Заголовок: I think if you are a..


I think if you are a poet
You can create
On sea and float
and doesn't matter
Computer is it
or simple paper.
When bright idea came up to you
You write it anywhere
and If you say that
it is impossible for you
to write on the computer
I think you aren't a poet
But someone else
May be just a person



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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 22.10.09 14:52. Заголовок: Hi-tech has integrat..


Hi-tech has integrated our mind deeply,
Sometimes we catch ourselves using it weekly,
But I don’t think that without computer there is no poet,
And your piece is marvelous, I wish I could do it.


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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 25.10.09 03:45. Заголовок: Caesar пишет: Hi-te..


Caesar пишет:

 цитата:
Hi-tech has integrated our mind deeply,
Sometimes we catch ourselves using it weekly,
But I don’t think that without computer there is no poet,
And your piece is marvelous, I wish I could do it.



My commentaries:
I can agree with you, my dear
To use computer without fear
It’s great invention in the world
To crown it all,
It’s better sold.

How right you are to say we use
This dear gadget very often
Then it is reasonable for a muse (поэт; любимец муз)
To type his poetry on 'it
To have quite good results indeed!


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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 25.10.09 03:01. Заголовок: Your thoughts are li..


Your thoughts are like I've mentioned
And I agree with you
Each masterpiece - creation
Can be typed on the computer too!

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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 25.10.09 19:05. Заголовок: Reply to Мансурова Лиана



I’m absolutely unanimous with you,
Your words are really true.
But let me say to your last lines:
We can’t be poets only due to rhymes.



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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 22.10.09 10:35. Заголовок: Confrontation of two opposites.


Computer is the thing of evil.
His eye is big and really evil.
It makes all people a bit nervous,
Through prism of numbers looks enormous.

Poetry is our gladness.
It gives us wings to fly from sadness.
It makes us fly instead of going
And give to people sense of loving.

We can’t compare these two things,
If we combine it’ll shred the wings.
We’ll stay on Earth and leave the joy.
Don’t use computer as a toy!


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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 22.10.09 10:46. Заголовок: Why don't you li..


Why don't you like computer? It's a good helper if to use it correctly!

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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 22.10.09 11:21. Заголовок: Computer helps us ve..


Computer helps us very much,
But if you use it very often
And take resources it can offer,
It harms the head of us too much.

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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 22.10.09 14:24. Заголовок: Nowadays computer is..


Nowadays computer is the cleverest one
It’s the well-known fact.
But as the author said:
It can destroy your health
If use it very often.


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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 22.10.09 14:57. Заголовок: Too late, my comrade..


Too late, my comrade, we now use
Computer even to see pictures of Lee Bruce,
It has gone inside our eye,
And if we destroy it, we all will die.


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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 22.10.09 18:06. Заголовок: I suppose that you a..


I suppose that you are clever!

i will remember your poem forever

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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 22.10.09 18:58. Заголовок: Your poem is a flash..


Your poem is a flash in high,
It makes my face a little smile.
I liked the way of your creation,
It quickly caught all my attention.

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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 22.10.09 21:22. Заголовок: Stillhet пишет: Com..


Stillhet пишет:

 цитата:
Computer is the thing of evil.
His eye is big and really evil.
It makes all people a bit nervous,
Through prism of numbers looks enormous.

Poetry is our gladness.
It gives us wings to fly from sadness.
It makes us fly instead of going
And give to people sense of loving.

We can’t compare these two things,
If we combine it’ll shred the wings.
We’ll stay on Earth and leave the joy.
Don’t use computer as a toy!



I'd like to comment this one,
It really has brought me a lot of fun.
Computer's really made by demons,
They make us stupid, slowly kill us.

You're right, we ought to get some rest.
Although we think that it's the best
thing, the humanity had brought in daily life,
But in a race with clock we only deeper dive
In that great world called Internet
And stays quite even TVset...

I like your word about the sence
Of loving. But I'll stand against
Your instance not to use it as a toy
Because more than a half of that's for getting joy)))




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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 22.10.09 21:38. Заголовок: Your idea is quite d..


Your idea is quite deep
Computer for poetry is rip)))

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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 25.10.09 02:04. Заголовок: If a packet hits a p..


If a packet hits a pocket on a socket on a port,
And the bus is interrupted as a very last resort,
And the memory address makes your floppy disk abort,
Then the socket packet pocket has an error to report!

If your cursor finds a menu item followed by a dash,
And the double-clicking icons put your window in the trash,
And your data is corrupted because the index doesn't hash,
The situation then is hopeless, and your system will be crashed!

If the label on your cable on the gable at your house,
Says the network is connected to the button on your mouse,
But your packets want to tunnel to another protocol,
That's repeatedly rejected by the printer down the hall.

And your screen is all distorted by the side effects of gauss,
So, your icons in the window are as wavy as a souse,
Then you may as well reboot and go out with a bang,
As I’m sure I'm a poet, then the sucker is going to hang!

When the copy of your floppy's getting sloppy on the disk,
And the microcode instructions cause unnecessary RISC,
Then you have to flash your memory and you'll want to RAM your ROM,
Quickly turn off your computer being ready to write with your plume!



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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 22.10.09 10:43. Заголовок: Helllo.dear friends-..


Helllo.dear friends-poets!!!!!
A man with opened heart and clear thoughts
A man who wants to change who doesn’t stand.
He is a poet, it’s a real role!
He doesn’t follow words that he was said.

And poetry for him is only way
To show troubles of this dirty world
He doesn’t need to write a lot or say
He can tell everything by using only word!

And how can he use computer words!
They are unreal, grey without kindness!
A real poet chooses classic roads
And writes on white and dear sheets of papers!



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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 22.10.09 13:08. Заголовок: I like your poem ver..


I like your poem very much
It`s not the Double Dutch,
You have an excellet idea
it`s the best poem here.

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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 22.10.09 19:58. Заголовок: my friend I agree wi..


my friend I agree with you and also believe that the present poet writes on sheets of paper)))))

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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 25.10.09 01:57. Заголовок: My computer has a la..


My computer has a language
That is also strange to me.
It speaks either “RAM” or “Gigabytes”
And what can “ROM” then be?

I can’t understand the “Windows”,
As computer informs me there
Is not any “Gem Clip”
On the back of my page,
And it does it with its eyes
Blink and stare!

I don't understand what antivirus is
That exists thanks to deeds wizards do,
Still it’s called defragmenter
Or the scanning disk
And a virus cleaning thing too.

Both computer and I
Still work hand and eye.
And the mouse in its house
Helps to translate
Without any mistake!


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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 25.10.09 03:02. Заголовок: I disagree - a poet ..


I disagree - a poet can use another road
And classic way does not mean it is real
To tell the truth for me it’s not ideal
I can express my feelings in new mode –
The way I’m doing it right here:
To type without using pen or feather
Like this creation makes my mind work clear
And nothing can depend on what I think or weather.

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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 22.10.09 10:56. Заголовок: I agree with people,..


I agree with people,
Who wrote before.
And want to add, that
You can all and more!
If you have some ideas
And you can think.
You don’t need in expansive
And beautiful sheet!


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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 22.10.09 11:04. Заголовок: I'm sorry but yo..


I'm sorry but you are not correct!
When you take paper, you are a poet!
Without it you are only a dreamer!
And your thoughts are not for a reader!

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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 22.10.09 14:37. Заголовок: think for a while...


Гавриленко Давыд
Don’t think that paper makes a man of you
Don’t hope to get it
The only way it makes your dream come true –
…Oh! I won’t prompt you with it!

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Пост N: 1
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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 22.10.09 11:14. Заголовок: written by Gulnara Danilenko


As once a wise man said
To write a poetry and not to use a comp
What’s wrong?
I’m always doing things like that
And I’ve created songs!


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Пост N: 3
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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 22.10.09 11:15. Заголовок: You can't write ..


You can't write poetry on the computer,
But I can't write them anywhere.
Let's think of problem all together
And find solution which is fair.
I offer you to write somewhere,
But not on the computer.
Remember my advice forever
Or write another to compare.

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Пост N: 3
Зарегистрирован: 22.10.09
Откуда: Россия, Ижевск
ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 22.10.09 11:39. Заголовок: We live in twenty-fi..


We live in twenty-first century,
Hi people! Now!
And computer is used as material
As board and paper
For writing some thing
I think is right it
Go with the time!))



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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 22.10.09 12:23. Заголовок: To write the poems i..


To write the poems is for me
In any way can do it;
But know grammar bad
It is so sad,
The computer,i think,
Can help me
All my mistaks improve
I don`t tell lies,it`s truth.
So the computer is our helper.
It is better than sheet of paper
You can lose it any where
But computer is always near.

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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 22.10.09 13:11. Заголовок: hi-tech is cool hi-t..


hi-tech is cool hi-tech is funny byt it costs a lot of money!
It wil help you It is trye so my friend, I`m with you!

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Пост N: 5
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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 22.10.09 13:36. Заголовок: But how can you help..


But how can you help me?
I don`t understand
But thank you for your commet!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Пост N: 2
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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 22.10.09 14:22. Заголовок: So, I think the same..


So, I think the same!
Our thinking is a flame
Do not limit your-self paper frame!



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Пост N: 5
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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 22.10.09 23:10. Заголовок: You have a very good..


You have a very good idea
Your one is also bright and clear!

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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 22.10.09 12:32. Заголовок: Recently I was...


Recently I was
on graffiti exhibition
for all of us
it was interesting session

artist give their text
a part of his soul
that is how he thought
get from others respect below


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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 22.10.09 13:24. Заголовок: Everyone of us Has ..


Everyone of us
Has wrote some poems just!
It is good argument for Quentin,
We can write poems for twenty!
On the computer or peace of paper...
It doesn't mattet, cause everybody of us is creator!


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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 22.10.09 14:00. Заголовок: do you think we can ..


do you think
we can compete
with brilliant genius
such brad pitt?
ohohoh
it was joke
i ment briliant
as quentin!

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Пост N: 3
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Откуда: Россия, Ульяновск
ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 22.10.09 14:31. Заголовок: Re


Oh sometimes to write you need some coffe
sometimes to create you need some tea,
I must agree use your comruter,
Let a cyber world to be!

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Пост N: 2
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Откуда: Россия, Салават
ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 22.10.09 14:50. Заголовок: :sm33: Your brain e..


Your brain excited me a bit,
Your creation is a hit!
You are right in all your lines.
Rational thinking is really wise!

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Пост N: 2
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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 22.10.09 13:26. Заголовок: Just a poem?


All life in the world wide wap,
All life is in the Internet.
Buy some goods in the net!
Feal in love in the Internet
Writting poetry so easy ,
Use your browzer
Find your rhyme
Everything is going fine!

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Пост N: 1
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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 22.10.09 13:43. Заголовок: Don't matter whe..


Don't matter where to write,
Use a pen or a keyboard-don't see the difference,
It's enough to have a good mind,
And to compose poems with magnificense.

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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 22.10.09 14:31. Заголовок: i am agree i do not ..


it is importent where to write
only paper can keep your thoughts right

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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 22.10.09 14:41. Заголовок: So I agree with your opinion


Your opinion suits to me,
All your views are pretty free,
It doesn't matter what you want,
Write everything but do it right!!!

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Пост N: 6
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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 22.10.09 16:27. Заголовок: I like your idea YOu..


I like your idea
YOu are right
It doesn`t matter
Where we can write!!

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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 22.10.09 20:55. Заголовок: Pupsya пишет: Don&#..


Pupsya пишет:

 цитата:
Don't matter where to write,
Use a pen or a keyboard-don't see the difference,
It's enough to have a good mind,
And to compose poems with magnificense.



I absolutely agree with you...
And I sare your point of view

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Пост N: 1
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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 22.10.09 13:49. Заголовок: To write it means to..


To write it means to live,
To live … but where and why?
To write it’s not to lie.
And if you lie it will be better you to die

The main idea what to write?
The rough words on walls and fences?
But as I said it’s better die.

To write the poems on the paper
It would be better than that one.
To write the poems on the computer…
It means to live for lie..,
And as I said…
It’s better die…


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Пост N: 3
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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 22.10.09 14:36. Заголовок: i am agree i do not ..


i am agree
i do not want to live for lie
It isn't for me

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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 24.10.09 20:58. Заголовок: tekiza пишет: To wr..


tekiza пишет:

 цитата:
To write it means to live,
To live … but where and why?
To write it’s not to lie.
And if you lie it will be better you to die




It`s difficult to prove it,
It`s difficult to dany,
Don`t you know where live and why?
May by you are right
I don`t want to lie.

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Пост N: 1
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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 22.10.09 13:58. Заголовок: Electronics and soul..


Electronics and soul cannot be together.
I want to write my poems by a feather.
I write about my feelings, about weather.
Electronic cannot keep my thoughts together.

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Пост N: 2
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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 22.10.09 14:11. Заголовок: Sheet of paper or Mi..


Sheet of paper
or Microsoft word
for me it doesn’t matter
poetry open in me big world

the paper inspire
computer puts on working desire

if everybody would understand it
and know more a bit
we’ll have new silver age
that open Russian poetry page


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Пост N: 3
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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 22.10.09 14:35. Заголовок: Hm... New Russian po..


Hm... New Russian poetry page...
It is good idea, and nothing strange!
With using computer we can do more..
And our vocabulary doesn't be poor!

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Пост N: 4
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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 22.10.09 15:31. Заголовок: Big poet are not poo..


Big poet are not poor with words
them poems fly like birds
they do not need comp to write
What do they feel in right

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Пост N: 1
Зарегистрирован: 22.10.09
ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 22.10.09 14:44. Заголовок: Here is my work


“You can’t write the poetry on the computer” – Quentin Tarantino said.
But I do it every day! What’s wrong with that?
Does he mean that ‘because computer is metal,
For the power of the word it is very lethal?

Computer is expensive hi-tech instrument,
Or maybe not expensive – money spending is imminent,
But you don’t waste that money, ‘cause you won’t ever care
Just because you can’t do some urgent affair.

Computer is used in many spheres of life
By anyone, no matter what name carries he – Clive,
Johnny or Garfield – no one pays attention,
Everyone chooses his working dimension.

I think that poetry will never be dead,
No matter in what form it’s going to be made,
Written or electronical, and proof of it is that
Piece of poetry of mine that I have published in the Internet.


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Пост N: 3
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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 22.10.09 19:59. Заголовок: Caesar пишет: “You ..


Caesar пишет:

 цитата:
“You can’t write the poetry on the computer” – Quentin Tarantino said.
But I do it every day! What’s wrong with that?
Does he mean that ‘because computer is metal,
For the power of the word it is very lethal?

Computer is expensive hi-tech instrument,
Or maybe not expensive – money spending is imminent,
But you don’t waste that money, ‘cause you won’t ever care
Just because you can’t do some urgent affair.

Computer is used in many spheres of life
By anyone, no matter what name carries he – Clive,
Johnny or Garfield – no one pays attention,
Everyone chooses his working dimension.

I think that poetry will never be dead,
No matter in what form it’s going to be made,
Written or electronical, and proof of it is that
Piece of poetry of mine that I have published in the Internet.



my friend!you are a poet!
I leave you comment =)

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Пост N: 3
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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 23.10.09 15:50. Заголовок: I can agree with yo..



I can agree with your position,
Because the real master can
To right his work for competition
And everywhere! Every when!


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Пост N: 1
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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 22.10.09 14:56. Заголовок: ­Re:


*PRIVAT*

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Пост N: 3
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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 22.10.09 15:10. Заголовок: ahahaha that's g..


ahahaha
that's genius comment!

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Пост N: 2
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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 22.10.09 14:59. Заголовок: as for me, i thnk it..


as for me, i thnk
it's bad to write them in the net
you always suffer the disomfort
and write some flapdoodles i bet

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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 22.10.09 15:24. Заголовок: I think that poem wr..


I think that poem write a feather
I think that poem write on a paper
I think that poem write a hand
I think that poem it is the soul
I think that on a computer not heartfelt
I think that on a computer not comfortably
And I agree that we can’t write poetry on the computer


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Пост N: 6
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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 22.10.09 15:42. Заголовок: I would like you to ..


I would like you to know
Each person has own choice now
i choose to write on paper
I want to keep my taper.

Electronics and soul cannot be together.
I want to write my poems by a feather.
I write about my feelings, about weather.
Electronic cannot keep my thoughts together

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Пост N: 2
Зарегистрирован: 22.10.09
Откуда: Россия, Ульяновск
ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 22.10.09 16:14. Заголовок: Really,computer does..


Really,computer doesn't have feelings,
and the paper is more habitual way to write,
so,maybe you are right,
but we are not going to start a fight



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Пост N: 4
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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 22.10.09 17:49. Заголовок: your rhyme is nice d..


your rhyme is nice
do you recognize?
content is diligent too
but evidens to poor

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Пост N: 3
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Откуда: Россия, Салават
ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 22.10.09 16:41. Заголовок: You should be very bright


Never choose between two things
The computers and blank sheets
Life is modern nowaday’,
Old ways of writing are going away.


It doesn’t matter how you write,
But you should be very bright.
Your talent, mind and brain
Will help you on your life way.


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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 22.10.09 16:57. Заголовок: What for ivent we po..


What for ivent we poems?
For our soil, for our heart
We don`t think about the future
It doesn`t metter now!!!!!

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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 24.10.09 18:08. Заголовок: I like your Thought ..


I like your Thought
I like your style
Don't stop and always smile

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Пост N: 3
Зарегистрирован: 22.10.09
Откуда: Россия, Ульяновск
ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 22.10.09 16:58. Заголовок: your poem is wonderf..


your poem is wonderful
a fantastic idea: that computers and papers should be near


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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 23.10.09 10:32. Заголовок: Our cycle of hi-tech..


Our cycle of hi-tech
We use computers every time
And we shouldn't look back
To use computer isn’t crime.


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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 24.10.09 18:01. Заголовок: Your poem is the bes..


Your poem is the best
develop your talent and don't rest

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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 24.10.09 18:04. Заголовок: Your poem is the bes..


Your poem is the best
develop your talent and don't rest

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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 22.10.09 16:52. Заголовок: You can write poetry on the computer!


You can write poetry on the computer!
I cannot compose verses on the computer.
I cannot write verses on the computer, being not houses.


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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 22.10.09 16:52. Заголовок: Это я..


Это я

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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 22.10.09 16:52. Заголовок: You can not write poetry on the computer


You can not compose poetry on the computer.

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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 22.10.09 16:52. Заголовок: Well Done! The poem ..


Well Done!
The poem is the perfect one
I can't add anything
And have the same opinion
I think this is the best poem
that I have ever heard


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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 22.10.09 16:52. Заголовок: You can not write poetry on the computer0


you can write poetry on the computer,becouse I think that it not very difficult .Every person use computer in our every day life and write poetry on the computer not very difficult!

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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 22.10.09 16:52. Заголовок: You can't write poetry on the computer


You can't write poetry on the computer,
you should thoughts write on the list.
I think it is more useful and easy for me.

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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 22.10.09 16:52. Заголовок: "You can't w..


"You can't write poetry on the computer"
I go to the briech
I go along of street
I walk along and can't back!

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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 22.10.09 18:31. Заголовок: Becoming crazy from ..


Becoming crazy from imagination,
When brains are burst from rhymes and words,
When you are full of thoughts and inspiration,
It doesn't matter: sheets or kea-boards.



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Пост N: 9
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Откуда: Россия, Волгоград
ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 22.10.09 21:20. Заголовок: I must admit. For fa..


I must admit. For fair!
You've got a point there.
No matter where you write and what the way;
Just have sincere feelings to convey!!!

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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 22.10.09 18:50. Заголовок: Hello my dear TARANT..


Hello my dear TARANTINO!
I shouldn’t tell you chao bambino!
Be ready to know something cool
I make up poetry in water pool
And what? Are you sure it is bad?
No, no, no, I am not getting mad
I’m just writing poetry with comp.
Are you afraid of it, as a bomb?
Oh, my honey! You are so funny!
How is getting on Bugs Bunny?
Let’s talk about your work
Two words: Pulp fiction
It everybody knows without description
But it is not influenced my view
I will write poetry on the computer that is new


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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 22.10.09 19:43. Заголовок: F.U.N.N.Y пишет: He..


F.U.N.N.Y пишет:

 цитата:
Hello my dear TARANTINO!
I shouldn’t tell you chao bambino!
Be ready to know something cool
I make up poetry in water pool
And what? Are you sure it is bad?
No, no, no, I am not getting mad
I’m just writing poetry with comp.
Are you afraid of it, as a bomb?
Oh, my honey! You are so funny!
How is getting on Bugs Bunny?
Let’s talk about your work
Two words: Pulp fiction
It everybody knows without description
But it is not influenced my view
I will write poetry on the computer that is new



I agree with you, my dear friend
After all, today 21
this is also our man
and there we want
there we composed !


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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 22.10.09 20:36. Заголовок: I like very much you..


I like very much your idea
it is very clear!!!


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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 23.10.09 11:10. Заголовок: Oh! It is really po..


Oh! It is really positive
I want again to live!
You are so cool,
And your poem is rule!

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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 23.10.09 15:40. Заголовок: So funny So good! It..


So funny
So good!
It can make
To better mood!

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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 22.10.09 18:53. Заголовок: Opinions are different


Quentin's idea,
Isn't clear.
It doesn't matter where to write,
All what you need - a perfect mind!

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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 22.10.09 19:09. Заголовок: you have an excelle..


you have an excellet idea
i like it so much
we shoud created poem
every where we want!!!!

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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 22.10.09 19:03. Заголовок: people write poems ..


people write poems
when they are happy;
people write poems
when they are sad;
people need a sheet of paper
and several pens;
people need an inspiration ,
they also need a mood,
but i suppose a computer
shoul not be used!!!!!!!!

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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 22.10.09 20:17. Заголовок: ksenya пишет: I d..


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I do not agree with you Torontino,
and your idea is not clear,
proof is that we write clear here!


Thank you for comment,my sweet
Thank you for thought
I can’t wait for our meet
Let me dreams good caught


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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 22.10.09 21:16. Заголовок: I agree with your co..


I agree with your cogitation
I also think you have a very good inspiration.

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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 23.10.09 05:55. Заголовок: I disagree with you...


I disagree with you.
Does it really matter?
To write a poem is all for you
Without any sheet of paper!

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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 22.10.09 19:33. Заголовок: I do not agree with..



I do not agree with you Torontino,
and your idea is not clear,
proof is that we write clear here!

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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 22.10.09 20:41. Заголовок: Ksenya, you are poet..


Ksenya, you are poet
you can compose a poem at moment!!!

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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 22.10.09 21:50. Заголовок: ВСЕМ ВСЕМ ЖЕЛАЮ УДАЧ..


ВСЕМ ВСЕМ ЖЕЛАЮ УДАЧИ!

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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 22.10.09 21:57. Заголовок: хе хе!!! спс!!!! Ксю..


хе хе!!! спс!!!! Ксюш!!!!!!!!!! (перешли на родной язык, it is so cool)

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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 22.10.09 20:28. Заголовок: I disagree with Quen..


I disagree with Quentin Tarantino
I think it is an incorrectly idea,
Cause if you write the poems well,
lf you have a good imagination as well,
To write a poem on the computer or peace of paper
I think it doesn't really matter.

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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 22.10.09 21:06. Заголовок: You have an unusual ..


You have an unusual opinion,dear!

I suppose ,that it is clear !!!!!!))))))


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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 22.10.09 20:31. Заголовок: Regardless where to ..


Regardless where to create
And what to use for it
You certainly must not forget
That word is as a bit
Of refined arrow... Isn't it?^^
It may effect on all your being
It's built by it as well
It makes you smile,
It makes you sing,
It makes you cry,
And also think
About varios mistakes
And happy moments. In that case
I'd like to say and underline
Whether the keyboard or the ink,
Try to invent a gorgeous think,
(It's unimportant where) Save it,
Don't let the time to make it burried.
Computers mustn't come to mind.


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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 22.10.09 20:31. Заголовок: Regardless where to ..


Regardless where to create
And what to use for it
You certainly must not forget
That word is as a bit
Of refined arrow... Isn't it?^^
It may effect on all your being
It's built by it as well
It makes you smile,
It makes you sing,
It makes you cry,
And also think
About varios mistakes
And happy moments. In that case
I'd like to say and underline
Whether the keyboard or the ink,
Try to invent a gorgeous think,
(It's unimportant where) Save it,
Don't let the time to make it burried.
Computers mustn't come to mind.


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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 22.10.09 20:31. Заголовок: Computers mustn't come to mind...


Regardless where to create
And what to use for it
You certainly must not forget
That word is as a bit
Of refined arrow... Isn't it?^^
It may effect on all your being
It's built by it as well
It makes you smile,
It makes you sing,
It makes you cry,
And also think
About varios mistakes
And happy moments. In that case
I'd like to say and underline
Whether the keyboard or the ink,
Try to invent a gorgeous think,
(It's unimportant where) Save it,
Don't let the time to make it burried.
Computers mustn't come to mind.


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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 22.10.09 20:31. Заголовок: Computers mustn't come to mind...


Regardless where to create
And what to use for it
You certainly must not forget
That word is as a bit
Of refined arrow... Isn't it?
It may effect on all your being
It's built by it as well
It makes you smile,
It makes you sing,
It makes you cry,
And also think
About varios mistakes
And happy moments. In that case
I'd like to say and underline
Whether the keyboard or the ink,
Try to invent a gorgeous think,
(It's unimportant where) Save it,
Don't let the time to make it burried.
Computers mustn't come to mind.

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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 22.10.09 20:31. Заголовок: Computers mustn't come to mind.


Regardless where to create
And what to use for it
You certainly must not forget
That word is as a bit
Of refined arrow... Isn't it?
It may effect on all your being
It's built by it as well
It makes you smile,
It makes you sing,
It makes you cry,
And also think
About varios mistakes
And happy moments. In that case
I'd like to say and underline -
Computers mustn't come to mind.
Whether the keyboard or the ink,
Try to invent a gorgeous think,
(It's unimportant where) Save it,
Don't let the time to make it burried.


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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 22.10.09 20:31. Заголовок: Computers mustn't come to mind.


Regardless where to create
And what to use for it
You certainly must not forget
That word is as a bit
Of refined arrow... Isn't it?
It may effect on all your being
It's built by it as well
It makes you smile,
It makes you sing,
It makes you cry,
And also think
About varios mistakes
And happy moments. In that case
I'd like to say and underline -
Computers mustn't come to mind.
Whether the keyboard or the ink,
Try to invent a gorgeous think,
(It's unimportant where) Save it,
Don't let the time to make it burried.


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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 22.10.09 20:41. Заголовок: I disagree with Quen..


I disagree with Quentin Tarantino
I think it is an incorrectly idea,
Cause if you write the poems well,
If you have a good imagination as well,
To write a poem on the computer or peace of paper
I think it doesn't really matter.


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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 22.10.09 20:43. Заголовок: OMG What is it? What..


OMG What is it? What's happened with my posts? I'm really sorry for this.)) O_o

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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 22.10.09 20:50. Заголовок: We may write poems o..


We may write poems on computer
All we need is practice
We may show
Our own emotions, thoughts, ideas
It's doesn't matter Where? and How?
On sheet of paper or on computer
It doesn't matter
To my mind,
it's doesn't matter....

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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 22.10.09 20:52. Заголовок: I disagree with Quen..


I disagree with Quentin Tarantino
I think it is an incorrectly idea,
Cause if you write the poems well,
If you have a good imagination as well,
To write a poem on the computer or peace of paper
I think doesn't really matter.

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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 22.10.09 21:06. Заголовок: Укроп пишет: I disa..


Укроп пишет:

 цитата:
I disagree with Quentin Tarantino
I think it is an incorrectly idea,
Cause if you write the poems well,
If you have a good imagination as well,
To write a poem on the computer or peace of paper
I think doesn't really matter.



That's it
You really right
Everything is going all right
If you had a good imagination
You can write on any subject
and its really so

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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 22.10.09 22:03. Заголовок: If I'm full of t..


If I'm full of transcendental hot ideas,
My eyes will be in happy tears.
No matter what I choose to use, a paper or computer.
My rhymes will find a suitor.

Pay attention to the flight of thought
Rather than to paper or a keyboard!





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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 22.10.09 21:05. Заголовок: ..


You can't write poetry on the computer
You really tired
Your eyes are closed
You are sitting one hour, two...
You can't do anything
Don't upset.
Switch off your computer
And go to bed.

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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 22.10.09 21:16. Заголовок: Yo maybe right You m..


Yo maybe right
You maybe wrong
Computer likes a paper white
which does harm very very strong

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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 22.10.09 21:09. Заголовок: You can't write ..


You can't write poetry on the computer
You really tired
Your eyes are closed
You are sitting one hour, two...
You can't do anything
Don't upset.
Switch off your computer
And go to bed.

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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 22.10.09 21:09. Заголовок: You can't write ..


You can't write poetry on the computer
You really tired
Your eyes are closed
You are sitting one hour, two...
You can't do anything
Don't upset.
Switch off your computer
And go to bed.

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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 22.10.09 21:49. Заголовок: The better way in an..


The better way in any situation
Is holding it for all the time switched off
It always brings some ruthful aftermaths
And illnesses instead of gifts.

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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 23.10.09 11:21. Заголовок: You are righ! I did ..


You are righ! I did that yerstaday!

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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 22.10.09 21:12. Заголовок: I think that poem mu..


I think that poem must be written on a feather
I think that poem must be written on a paper
I think that poem write with a hand
I think that poem it is the soul
I think that in the computer it can’t be thin in the hull
I think it’s not comfortable to write
On the computer I can write only poem are white


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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 22.10.09 23:21. Заголовок: Where should you wri..


Where should you write a poem
On the computer or the sheet of paper
I think everybody knows
It doesn't matter.
It must be accessible and clean.
_____________________________
made by Алексей Сергеев


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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 22.10.09 23:48. Заголовок: I like you idea You ..


I like you idea
You are right
it doesn`t matter
where we can write!!!

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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 22.10.09 23:35. Заголовок: Sheets of paper, pen..


Sheets of paper, pens or keyboards...
What's the odds?
We forget about our thoughts.
They inspire us to write the rhymes
Flying over clouds in the skies.
When we yield to feelings in the hearts,
Words in versus spring to our minds!
Then a poem goes its own way
So as to take the readers' breath away!

Anyway, my poems with my rhymes
Can dawn on me at different times...
Handwriting letter or e-letter
For me it doesn't matter!
When inspiration comes, we'll see
What we need, paper or pc.

I wouldn't go along with Tarantino,
I dissaprove of his idea!



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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 23.10.09 00:15. Заголовок: Where should you wri..


Where should you write a poem
On the computer or the sheet of paper?
I think everybody knows
It doesn't matter.
It must be accessible and clear.


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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 23.10.09 05:27. Заголовок: Where should you wri..


Where should you write a poem
On the computer or the sheet of paper?
I think everybody knows
It doesn't matter.
It must be accessible and clean.
Everybody can understand it even a deer.


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123

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Where should you write a poem
On the computer or the sheet of paper
I think everybody knows
It doesn't matter.
It must be accessible and clean.

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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 23.10.09 06:27. Заголовок: you have an excellet..


you have an excellet idea
i like it so much
we shoud created poem
every where we want!!!!

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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 23.10.09 08:26. Заголовок: If you have ideas If..


If you have ideas
If you sit in quit
Take the sheet of paper
And begin to write.

If your inspiration
Comes in one of days
Quickly show perceptions
In the different ways.

And it isn't matter
Where to write the verse
It is really better
When you have own voice.

Choose the style of spelling
And begin to press
Or begin the writing
In your documents.



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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 23.10.09 08:38. Заголовок: Какен А.А. пишет: ..


Какен А.А. пишет:

 цитата:

If you have ideas
If you sit in quit
Take the sheet of paper
And begin to write.

If your inspiration
Comes in one of days
Quickly show perceptions
In the different ways.

And it isn't matter
Where to write the verse
It is really better
When you have own voice.

Choose the style of spelling
And begin to press
Or begin the writing
In your documents.


Your poem is very good

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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 23.10.09 11:14. Заголовок: Какен А.А. пишет: I..


Какен А.А. пишет:

 цитата:
If you have ideas
If you sit in quit
Take the sheet of paper
And begin to write.



I agree with your poem.
The same with me.


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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 23.10.09 13:17. Заголовок: Какен А.А. пишет: ..


Какен А.А. пишет:

 цитата:

If you have ideas
If you sit in quit
Take the sheet of paper
And begin to write.

If your inspiration
Comes in one of days
Quickly show perceptions
In the different ways.

And it isn't matter
Where to write the verse
It is really better
When you have own voice.

Choose the style of spelling
And begin to press
Or begin the writing
In your documents.

your poem just fine)) I think so тоо))

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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 23.10.09 08:34. Заголовок: Gentle words, the..


Gentle words, there is an aim
It seems we are playing a game
Easy smile, but not fun
Sweet music for no one
I want to win and not to lose
I want to think and not to rest
I want to laugh and not to sight
When I had done all tasks right


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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 23.10.09 09:59. Заголовок: I hope you carried o..


I hope you carried out tasks right
Because you very very kind!!!


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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 24.10.09 14:45. Заголовок: oh my gareable, it s..


oh my gareable,
it so terrible


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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 23.10.09 09:35. Заголовок: My idea is so clear ..


My idea is so clear
That you can dig it all.
Don’t be afraid and fear,
Comment me, hey! Come on!
I want to say you briefly
The poems are my life,
I try to get on deeply
Like steel and bitter knife.
My life is full of poets
And merriness, and fun,
Ideas sound like coins
And shine like summer sun.
You can write poems where
There are a lot of roads,
Or nobody’s disturbing,
And waves are caring boats
Of you imagination,
And soul comes away.
Give it emancipation
And it will really say
That wanted for the years,
And you will win it all!
Don’t worry, don’t have tears!
Let’s start it. So, let’s go!


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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 23.10.09 10:00. Заголовок: ND пишет: Don’t be ..


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 цитата:
Don’t be afraid and fear,


Excuse me? (Не будь страхом? хд)

People, don't you think it's boring
To use in every second post
The word, that's simply as a ghost...
Without synonyms... It's coming
To every second clever mind
And kicks out all of other kind...
Don't use this pair clear - idea,
Try to think of another rhyme
That would fit brilliantly here
And show the wealth of words in mind.




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Oh! It is real fantastic!
I agree with you
Oh! Your poem is realistic
And this express what you do!

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To write or not to write
It’s not the question.
If you can write,
You should write.
If you have ideas,
Emotions you want to share,
You should write poems.
I tried to write.
It was not easy, but exciting.
I wrote on paper
Because I’m sure
It’s better than computer.
You know
All famous poets wrote on paper.
You know
All famous stories were written by hand on paper.
I trust it more…


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It’s pleasant to hear
Your beautiful words.
I think you’ll receive
All poetical awards.


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Do you remember ,dear,
Those beautiful days ,
When we writing here
Old poems in our ways.

I'll tell you why I'm tardy and I hope my excuse will do.
I stopped to view upon a leaf a spider and some dew.
She spun a web before my eyes with a soft and silver hue,
And when she looked, I looked at her and whispered, "Peekaboo!"

I think I may have startled her and so I waved good-bye,
But when I turned around to go, I met a butterfly!
I almost caught him in my hand to bring to class for you,
But when I tried to peek inside, away my treasure flew.

And that is how I'm tardy, but I had to tell you why.
It's all the fault of a spider's web and a sneaky butterfly!
Looking at all this beauty I become inspired
And I want to make up something light.

I create a lot of poems which express my thoughts
I plunge into the wonderful world where only I know roads
Nobody can disturb to flight of my ideas
And I leave this world without any fears.


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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 23.10.09 18:50. Заголовок: Your poem is wonderf..


Your poem is wonderful!
I glad to hear it
Words are bright and colorful
You’ll win I predict.


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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 23.10.09 12:29. Заголовок: Where we write poems..


Where we write poems.

When the trouble come in your home…
When love was born in your heart
When you feel that you are alone
Take paper and begin to write and write…

Write about your senses,
Write about your life,
Write that you want to say,
About that you keep at night


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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 23.10.09 19:48. Заголовок: Your opinion is maje..


Your opinion is majestic;
You are great in all.
I agree with your poems which is realistic
And you never fall

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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 23.10.09 12:32. Заголовок: Poems can open our s..


Poems can open our spirit
Poems teach us to be sincere
Poems help us to creative
Poems carry out our dream.


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Do you hear,
Greatest poets
Righting poems
In the Word?

For example
As Shakespeare
Who so famous
In the world!

I can’t do it
Like each other
But I tryind
Do it good!

Don’t chide me
If my rhymes
Will be sound
Like a wood!


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oh my God
it so good !!


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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 23.10.09 16:06. Заголовок: You can’t write poetry on the computer


Computer is a great invention,
We cannot live without it.
Computers save the time and money,
This fact can everyone admits.

The 21st century is quick and fast,
It brings a progress every moment.
And we cannot waste our time,
That’s why the world invented robots.

Computers lighten our life,
They seldom make any mistakes.
It’s easier to live with them,
Computers like the human’s brains.

But everything cannot be perfect
And robots have the drawbacks too.
They carry out any work you ask for,
But the creative work can’t do.

Computers can play chess or cards
And always win you in spite your skills.
But different games are just a program
That doesn’t need some human sense.

In spite of all computer’s merits
It cannot help us to create
The works of arts, that need lots of feelings,
And can’t be by a heartless robots made.

So, I consider, that computers
Make our life a simple one.
But I’m sure no computer
Can write a poem, except a man.


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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 23.10.09 16:20. Заголовок: You can’t write poetry on the computer


Computer intelligence and human brain
So, what can I say?
I’ll try to find among them main.
I think, it is the brain.

You’ll never trust the computer all those:
Your feelings, emotions and thoughts.
You only can operate with the work
Yes, or maybe not?

It will never produce that
Your soul can produce in fact.
It only will serve to show,
The work you made your own.
But it will never express
The real ideas, emotions
I guess.


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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 23.10.09 16:27. Заголовок: You can’t write poetry on the computer


Poetry! What does it mean? It is an art
To show your own opinion through some words,
Word combinations, using different kinds of metaphors.
Contrast, compare some events through some phenomena.

You’ll take a book with poems, you will read,
You’ll understand the feeling of the author,
Because it’s only in the human forces
To realize the writer’s thoughts, emotions.

A person, who decides to write a poem,
Can show, express his view on life, on problems
With using different words and word expressions,
That isn’t carry only straight meanings but figurative also.

Just try to give a command to a computer
To write a poem, not very long, and although
It is a very clever machine with different systems,
In any way it will fail all his attempts.

You see, that the computer was invented
To calculate, to count up and solve some problems.
But not to think in a creative way. It can’t be so.

It is impossible to him to choose the right word
Because he doesn’t think about the whole idea of the work.
At last, I’d like to tell you that the poetry
Like an amazing picture on the wall
Looking at which, you feel exciting and enjoyable
Which gives you many points to live.


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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 23.10.09 16:44. Заголовок: I like the poems of ..


I like the poems of Kate and Gulkai
Which have the same idea,
That computer and poetry are different things
And they are incompatible.

Gulkai and Kate say that a computer
Is the machine without a soul.
It isn’t able to love, to suffer,
It is indifferent and cold.

It can’t express like any poet
His feelings, attitude and dreams.
So, let computers count something,
And a man write poems.


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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 23.10.09 16:34. Заголовок: You can’t write poetry on the computer.


Computer, computer, computer…
Here you can write quicker.
Here you can be a crazy gamer,
Here you are a powerful user!
But here you can’t think wider
Because you are only a user!
You can play complex games
Because you have brains.
He figures up his future steps.
It’s marvelous!
But… you have feelings to express,
And sometimes you make mistakes…
And you have a heart
That’s why sometimes life seems hard.
You can’t write poetry on the computer
Because the charming poetry
Is only for those who have hearts.


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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 23.10.09 17:21. Заголовок: If you are full of i..


If you are full of inspiration,
Creating poems at your heart,
No matter where to write.

If you are full of inspiration
With thoughts magnificant and kind,
No matter where to write.

If you are full of inspiration
The strongest thigs's imagination.
Machines or sheets. It doesn't matter.
Idead will decide what's better.

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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 23.10.09 16:55. Заголовок: Computers’ influence


Computers, Internet, Machines
Become more steadily for us.
Become we lazy and useless
As all the work is done for us.

We all the nights sit at them
And click, and click, and click again.
Become we irritated, stressed,
And don’t mind what’ll happen next.

We have forgotten sense of life
But we can live and be alive
We seldom speak and seldom think
We aren’t happy, we’re just sick.

Computers only the machines
They can’t express emotions, fears
They can’t show feelings and the mind,
And they can’t show the poem’s heart.

But we can love, dream and forgive,
But we can taste, feel and believe,
We also know, we think, relieve
I make a conclusion, we are not machines!

We depend on computers
And they also depend on us
But we are the humans
And they are only technologies.




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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 23.10.09 16:59. Заголовок: You can’t write the poetry on computer»


The computer is the modern machine
It hasn’t the soul, the tears.
It can’t express the feelings
Which show that you in dream

It hasn’t express the attention
Which shows that you in love.
It can’t convey true spirit
Which people feel in rather way.

The base of this mechanism
Is build on any programmer
Which is only situated
In some strict sequences.

The soul of any people
Is based on sincere senses.
We can feel, cry, worried
But computer can’t do it.



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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 23.10.09 17:02. Заголовок: You can’t write poetry on the computer.


‘You can’t write poetry on the computer,
You mean, that the machine can’t write itself.
My dear teacher?
O’k. I think you are quite right’
And there is nothing we could fight.
So, our world is nice and large
And no one tries to think too much.
We all have got that bad machines,
Which can’t improve our English skills.
We all have got that good machine,
Which make odd work that we don’t feel.
I love computer for it’s helpful
And so you do just for the same.
However, something makes me think,
That the machines not just play prinks.
What will be if one nice day,
We, you and I and they,
Become useless in all ways?
All computers are like monsters,
Teach us, tease us giving orders.
World is on the brink of tears,
For nothing good goes on for years.
Wake up, people! Don’t you see?
Machines are working just for spree!
So, what a shame!
Instead of using our brains,
We start to feel the programme fails.
Forget about our culture,
The most unique for our minds.
Don’t pay attention for the nature,
The main inspirer of times.
Compose, compose, compose ,my dear,
Your thoughts are peaceful and sane.
Compose, compose, compose, my dear,
For people, not machines have fame!


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"You can't write poetry on the computer”. Quentin Tarantino


I wonder, oh,

What is creation?

Is it a child of one’s imagination,

Glamorous fantasy or inspiration?

Can you create anything

Well or just badly,

Can you create anything

Just not to be wealthy?

Can you create anything

Without the tension?

Remember, it may become

Pride of the nation…

Excuse me

For lyrical long deviation…

I wanted to pay on them

Little attention…

You can’t write the poetry

On the computer,

Though it is not silly,

It isn’t a murder…

The poetry is

Like a game
With the words,

Like wonderful painting

Which was created in dots.

Take pen, use your hand,

Write about your thoughts.

And hear the silence

Instead of the noise.

Which noise?

Of the street?

Of computer, of course!


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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 23.10.09 18:28. Заголовок: Bring pen or pencil ..


Bring pen or pencil
Bring shirt of paper
Move away computer
And sit near the table

Think about your purpose
About your creation
Don't think about PC
Only then you will get a real satisfaction

When you will write it yourself
When you will do it without any machine
Only then you will have result
Only then you will have enthuasism


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If you have ideas
If you sit in quit
Take the sheet of paper
And begin to write...

Just nice, haven't got any comments


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Poetry! What does it mean? It is an art
To show your own opinion through some words...

Really...very huge verse)i think,i wouldn't create such poem

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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 23.10.09 18:45. Заголовок: "You can't write poetry on the computer”. Quentin Tarantino


When you write on a paper
And with pencil or pen
Your brains work greater
And cross and tore you can.

If you see a lot of paper on the floor
It seems that you are working more
Than if you look in empty screen
And there is nothing in.


You correct by “Delete” your mistake
But you can’t your computer take
And throw away in the window
Because its weight and price not low.


It is all what I want you to say
At this very interesting day!


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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 23.10.09 20:08. Заголовок: The computer – what ..


The computer – what is it?
I don’t understand what’s for it?
The computer is a machine
For to write the competition.
But I think it’s wrong,
Don’t for it, it was born.
The competition consists
Of our soul emotions.
The computer without brains
And it is without motions.



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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 23.10.09 20:29. Заголовок: Can’t you write poet..


Can’t you write poetry on the computer?
Why? I can everything! All that I want!
Computer’s my helper. Computer’s my friend
It gives information, knowledge you want.

I write all my tasks, exercises and songs
I watch many films on computer itself
It helps me to write and it help me to work
I could write this poetry on computer myself


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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 23.10.09 20:31. Заголовок: Quentin Tarantino, w..


Quentin Tarantino, why do you think so?
I work at the computer, and I like it best of all.
At present I think we must
Be communicated and be so fast.
And writing poems is so fine
Where your fantasy may fly.
But writing poems on computers
Gives you more time and feelings.


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Quentin Tarantino, why do you think so?
I work at the computer, and I like it best of all.
At present I think we must
Be communicated and be so fast.
And writing poems is so fine
Where your fantasy may fly.
But writing poems on computers
Gives you more time and feelings.



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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 23.10.09 20:36. Заголовок: Quentin Tarantino, w..


Quentin Tarantino, why do you think so?
I work at the computer, and I like it best of all.
At present I think we must
Be communicated and be so fast.
And writing poems is so fine
Where your fantasy may fly.
But writing poems on computers
Gives you more time and feelings.



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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 24.10.09 14:45. Заголовок: Quentin Tarantino


Frankly speaking I must say
That computers help us anyway.
Many sides of our life
Are connected with the files.
Poetry is no exception,
That’s may be my own perception.
Other thing is to discuss:
Is there poetry inside of us?
If a person can’t make rhymes
He may try a lot of times
Writing, printing, other things –
Useless will be these routines.
Rhymes and poems are the parts
Which come up from our hearts.
Other question may arise:
Can computers make you rhymes?
Yes, of course, they can do this:
Make you rhymes and other things.
But the poetry’s main goal
Is to touch us deep in soul.
So, from this my point of view
There’s no help for me and you.
My advice will be, my friends:
Try to make your rhymes yourselves.


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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 24.10.09 16:22. Заголовок: A poet is a person


A poet is a person who doesn't know where
He should create his poems - Indeed he doesn't care!
The thing is inspiration - it comes just when it wants
without invitation - and so a poet learns:
To write his thoughts on napkins, to write it while it flies
not always it's romantic, not always in the sky
He does it when he is sure his masterpiece’ll be born
the thing is: he must do it before inspiration’s gone!

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Why do you think so?
I think it is not true,
You can write everywhere
In the field, in the park and in the street too

Computer can help us
It correct our errors
It translate our task
And we become clever thus.


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Why do you think so?
I think it is not true,
You can write everywhere
In the field, in the park and in the street too

Computer can help us
It correct our errors
It translate our task
And we become clever thus.


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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 24.10.09 20:47. Заголовок: Caesar sad: I think ..


Caesar sad:
I think that poetry will never be dead,
No matter in what form it’s going to be made,
Written or electronical, and proof of it is that
Piece of poetry of mine that I have published in the Internet.


My answer:
I hope you are right
It depends on your mind
Don`t bother about Net
It can help us to connect

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Though my eyes see the keys,
Fingers do as they please.
They start words like “white” with “S”,
Though they very well know
That “S” is one key below
And reversal will not impress.

But look at some lines without rhythm or rhymes
Where semblance to verse is but fleeting.
And the tightly clenched fist will never assist
Or will words that do not bear repeating.

I'm really vexed
As they’ve lost my text,
And I can't find its new hidden venue.
The DELETE command has shown its hand,
I'll delete the damn thing from my menu.

There seems to be strain
Between fingers and brain
And I feel I would like to mention,
When my fingers typed “white”
And it didn't sound right,
Please believe it was not my intention.


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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 25.10.09 03:25. Заголовок: My work: Why have yo..


My work:
Why have you rushed to conclusion that
You can’t write poetry on the computer?
Just think about: it is said
To be convenient and much cuter!

I can’t object that a written verse
Is always easier to compose
Besides, computers do protect
The text from slang (it’s not correct):
The poet’s fancy’s like a bird –
He writes a poem like a gird
Or both bylina and converse
It can be lengthy, it can be terse.

But on the other hand, I think,
Though written verses are the pink,
Why not you try electronic rhymes?
We don’t live in ancient times!
It’s easier and far more quickly
It’s up to you: in details or meekly
You can correct the poem once
And twice, and thrice –
For your own device!

Thus, in conclusion, I’d like to note
Despite all this I do will vote
For electronics: it is as good
As written rhymes in any mood!

To rush to conclusion – делать поспешные выводы
Cuter – интереснее
Verse – поэзия
To protect – ограждать, предохранять
Gird – насмешка, колкость
Bylina – былина
Converse – обращение
Terse – сжатый, краткий, немногословный
The pink – нечто совершенное, верх, высшая степень
Meekly – кротко, смиренно
Thrice – трижды


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What a wonderful contest!!!

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My work:

In order poems to write
You need your fantasy inscribe.
Late at night from all to retire
So that nobody could you inquire
With pleasant plaid yourself to cover
Your thoughts of nature to discover
To dream you breath there ozone
Admiring flowers to your tone
And also trees with the sky above
To make declaration in verse of love
You’d better kiss beloved boy-friend
Stare the stars close hand in hand
Picturing mutual future in the end
At last I confess you, dear friend:
A poem refuses to create my head
When I sit at the monitor
Doesn’t wish to work my motor.


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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 25.10.09 16:45. Заголовок: In order poems to wr..


In order poems to write
You need your fantasy inscribe.
Late at night from all to retire
So that nobody could you inquire
With pleasant plaid yourself to cover
Your thoughts of nature to discover
To dream you breath there ozone
Admiring flowers to your tone
And also trees with the sky above
To make declaration in verse of love
You’d better kiss beloved boy-friend
Stare the stars close hand in hand
Picturing mutual future in the end
At last I confess you, dear friend:
A poem refuses to create my head
When I sit at the monitor
Doesn’t wish to work my motor.




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ссылка на сообщение  Отправлено: 25.10.09 19:07. Заголовок: Quentin Tarantino


Frankly speaking I must say
That computers help us anyway.
Many sides of our life
Are connected with the files.
Poetry is no exception,
That’s may be my own perception.
Other thing is to discuss:
Is there poetry inside of us?
If a person can’t make rhymes
He may try a lot of times
Writing, printing, other things –
Useless will be these routines.
Rhymes and poems are the parts
Which come up from our hearts.
Other question may arise:
Can computers make you rhymes?
Yes, of course, they can do this:
Make you rhymes and other things.
But the poetry’s main goal
Is to touch us deep in soul.
So, from this my point of view
There’s no help for me and you.
My advice will be, my friends:
Try to make your rhymes yourselves.


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